2013年4月8日 星期一

Tough Day

Trying to write poems on the train,
Outside is pissing rain,
Monday is always blue,
I can't think of a single clue,
It will be a very tough day.



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  1. good try


    Trying to write poems on (the) train,
    (delete: And the) outside is (it's) pissing rain,
    Monday is always blue,
    I can't think about (of) a single clue,
    It will be a very tough day- mentally drained.

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